Carl Narrative Writing - Week 3

Narrative Writing WALT add details and interesting vocabulary to support our ideas. WALT write a narrative. WALT use directional language in our writing. Task 1: Watch the video to help set the scene and to meet the characters. What can be seen? A green volcano moto moto/pig chunges/guy trees people in the distance. Fish in the ocean What can be heard? The rough water splashing the wind blowing the moto moto/pig snorting background music What can be smelt? Moto moto/pig the salty water What can be felt? Water, moto moto’s/pigs fur Who are the characters in your story? MOTO MOTO, CHUNGES, Where is your story set? MOTO MOTO BEACH/POND, What problem is going to happen in your story? MOTO MOTO and CHUNGES are to BIG!!!/THICC!!! How are you going to solve the problem? They go to the GYM!!! You are going to write below. Think about how you can: Add detail to your ideas using interesting vocabulary. Use directional language (in front of, behind, to the left of…) to make connections between your ideas. Write here: one day Chunges/guy decided to go surfing with his pig named moto moto so they went to sandy beach. It was a nice and sunny day but also windy. So they brought the car. Also because is was very far. When they went into the beach/pond the noticed the were to big/thicc!!! So they went out but people started to shout at them because the got pinned to the wall. They had no choice but to go to the gym/beach gym. (ten mins later) they finally found a beach gym. When they went in the gym they were amazed of how they could change they body/lifestyle but there was something else they amazed of which was the guy in there they were much bigger and tougher than them so they stayed away. But they did not notice that they were next to the entrance to the place. Then a guy that looked like the strongest person there so they ran and ran as fast as they can from him but they did not notice that he was a kind man. So the kind man gave them a ice cream but they said no because we are trying to get less fat. So the man helped them get fit. So they made a montage of them working out. So they became friend so thought the man how to surf because the man got them fit. And so they were the dream team.