The Trial

Dimic blog post week 1

Today I learned that there are more possibility's if you look at it from a different point of view. 

Carl Recount Writing - Week 1 Term 4

Recount Writing

WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing

WALT write a range of correct sentence types 

Step 1: Choose a writing prompt

Step 2: Plan for your writing

Introduction
What  When Where Why Who
3-4 Experiences  What do you see, hear, feel, smell, taste?
Experience:  It was painful and full of agony	Descriptive language/ elaborate: → agony painful  → scared hospital → surgery sleepy/the thing that makes you sleep when you have surgery
Conclusion: How are you going to finish your recount?

Step 4: Start writing. One day Chaun got his ball stuck on the roof. As school ended Chaun came to me and asked can you try to get my ball. As I tried to get his ball. I had thought that there were two ways, one of them was to get parental help or just do it myself but I chose to do it on my own. As Chaun tried to help me get on the roof I was thinking that their was a risk I was scared to do it but I kept on going as soon i thought I should have given up but the stubborn me told that I should keep on going. When i went on the sink I jump on the cover but my hands had slipped and I fell down and broke my arm 1 minute later my good friend gabriel help me to the office. As the office ladies called my mum my sister was confused. As I waited for my mum to come I told my sister to calm down. My mum asked what had happened but I was silent. After we went back home my mum said I have to go to starship. A few days later (2 days) I went back home. One month later I was able to make my arm straight. The End

this is about the term life's a stage this is Answer garden.