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Wednesday, 24 July 2019

dimic week one

today we did dimic and learned our times tables and addition and also our doubles. In our team we each got a different colour of a highlighter from our teacher. To talk about the part that she highlighted.

Monday, 22 July 2019

Something in the water


Today we had to name different species of animals. Blob fish and vampire crabs. Environments that they live in. like how they eat or what is there most liked foods. predators are danger's for them because the are part of there diet and higher on the food chain.     


Friday, 31 May 2019

Broken wing.

Carl Setting Description - Week 1 and 2

Describing a setting

WALT add details and interesting vocabulary to support our ideas.
WALT use directional language in our writing.

Title:
What can be seen?
A tall temple, a water source covered with moss, an old broken down floor, carvings carved into the wall,
What can be heard?
The trees rustling, water slowly moving, animals moving through  the trees and bushes, the birds chirping,
What can be smelt?
The smell of moss, the smell of dead animals,  
What can be felt?
Stone, moss, vines, carvings, roots from trees, trees, water,

You are going to write below.

Think about how you can:
  • Add detail to your ideas using interesting vocabulary.
  • Use directional language (in front of, behind, to the left of…) to make connections between your ideas.

Write here:
I can see and old broken down temple that has been hiding for thousands of years. above a water hole where the floor has broken. Also i can see old ancient carvings of the old aztec













religion of their god perched on a window it seems like. I can smell moss dropping from the trees. and surrounding my body making me sneeze.

Carl Imaginative Recount Writing (World's Fastest Train)

~ Riding on the world’s fastest train ~
Imaginative Recount Writing

WALT add detail and interesting vocabulary to support our ideas.

Step 1: Read the article

Step 2: Talk to your neighbour about what it would be like to be ride on this train.

Step 3: Plan for your writing

Title
Riding on the world's fastest train.
Introduction
I am using ______________ to catch my audience’s attention.
WWWWWH


3-4 Experiences
Experience:
1. At the train station-before
2. On the train-during
3. Back at the- train station
4.
Descriptive language/ elaborate:
→ i was on a car going to the station
→ so i went back in the car and went back home
→
→
Conclusion: How are you going to finish your recount?


Step 4: Start writing.

→ One day i got called to be a tester i was surprised that day. So i asked when do i come and they said tomorrow i was so energised to go so i went to sleep. I  woke up the next day. it was testing day so i went to the bathroom and took a bath. I changed and when it came to my surprise I did not know. What i was testing so I called them and. Asked them what am i testing. So the testing manager said to me ‘you are testing the world's fastest train which is a bullet train’ so i was not surprised because bullet trains are quite fast. Actually so they told me the location and so i met them at the subway that was closed for testing. And there was the guys who had told me and the testing manager was next to the door. He told me to put on the seat belt because it will be fast. So i went in and to my surprise it was quite nice and cold but I was not wearing a jacket so it was really cold so I will have to report them that. It was freezing cold so I put that on my notebook. So I got a call and they asked me ‘are you you ready to go’ and i said .Yes i am ready to go so they started the train but first they  made it slow and after ten seconds it started to speed up and. Got faster and faster every ten seconds and it became faster than the speed of sound and after twenty minutes (thirty minutes) I was already at busan. The train stopped in the train station in the middle of the city where it was busy and i mean busy. When i got outside of the train I noticed that there was nobody. (Probably because they were testing the train) I was looking around for any of the testing guys (or the testing manager) and I just sat there waiting for the guy to come. In the next ten minutes they finally came to save me because the doors were shut. Probably because they did not want a citizens to come in because i was dangerous for. Just random people that they don’t know and I when I got back home I went to sleep. (the end)