Carl Recount Writing - Week 1 Term 4

Recount Writing

WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing

WALT write a range of correct sentence types 

Step 1: Choose a writing prompt

Step 2: Plan for your writing

Introduction
What  When Where Why Who
3-4 Experiences  What do you see, hear, feel, smell, taste?
Experience:  It was painful and full of agony	Descriptive language/ elaborate: → agony painful  → scared hospital → surgery sleepy/the thing that makes you sleep when you have surgery
Conclusion: How are you going to finish your recount?

Step 4: Start writing. One day Chaun got his ball stuck on the roof. As school ended Chaun came to me and asked can you try to get my ball. As I tried to get his ball. I had thought that there were two ways, one of them was to get parental help or just do it myself but I chose to do it on my own. As Chaun tried to help me get on the roof I was thinking that their was a risk I was scared to do it but I kept on going as soon i thought I should have given up but the stubborn me told that I should keep on going. When i went on the sink I jump on the cover but my hands had slipped and I fell down and broke my arm 1 minute later my good friend gabriel help me to the office. As the office ladies called my mum my sister was confused. As I waited for my mum to come I told my sister to calm down. My mum asked what had happened but I was silent. After we went back home my mum said I have to go to starship. A few days later (2 days) I went back home. One month later I was able to make my arm straight. The End

this is about the term life's a stage this is Answer garden.

Carl Massive Giants and Tiny Superheroes

Carl Thirst - Characters Feelings

The dangerous writing game

There was a biker with his bicycle. The track was dangoures it went staight down the biker was counfused with the track he said why had they made this track in his head. He thought that the earth was flat or was a sqaure. Well in my opion  i thought the to but astournoghts that go in space had seen the earth. I had my brain thinking is the earth flat or is it a sqaure i had always believed that the earth is a sphere i did not expect the to be real. I thougth of something else is this a trick with a green screen.

Sorry for all the mistakes but this wasn't on purpose. This is because of the dangerous writing game where you can not stop writing. And if anything is highlighted green that means a its a mistake.

Also this was the project of M.S.S in associate  with Roman. They had blown up a bomb and this was a affect of it. 

Dimic blog post week 7 problem 1.

Today we did our dimic in our dimic groups. The question was A farmer had 238 sheep and put them in 7 paddock how many sheep was in one paddock. the answer was 34. 

The most Dangerous writing game.

There was a tiny mouse hanging from the roof trying to get the delicate cheese from the mouse trap and the mouse even had gear so in case he gets hit by the trap it hurts less. Also you could see his hole in the background it was a deep deep hole i knew the because it was pitch-black in that hole i did not expect the from a tiny mouse being able to out smart us humans i thought for a sec if the mouse was a guy dressed as a mouse but if its real i am amazed. that mouse is smarter than me and my sister we would have never have thought of that.

This was the most Dangerous writing game. this writing game  this game does not let you stop writing.

this was hard for me because i have a broken arm.                                           

Also the was the project of M.S.S in associate  with Roman.